In her stories, the character from the manga seem like they have taken drugs, and her OCs (original characters) seem like they were cut out from paper. They have no personality whatsoever. They are just there to
Her prose is horrendous, her characters are stupid and she fails at grammar and spelling. She has managed to make a character rape his own arm around someone's shoulder merely by missing out a letter! A useful skill, I'm sure. I am a self-confessed grammar nazi, and I could practically feel my blood pressure rising as I read the... block of words strung together. There is no structure, nothing! Her punctuation was missing!
She fails at formatting too. Hasn't ANYONE taught her how to paragraph? She puts huge chunks of words together, and my eyes water even as I am reading it. *takes tissue*
Now, for the characters. *composes herself for long speech* I was speechless after reading what she calls fanfiction. Nothing in it tells me that it is fanfiction other than the names. Zero acts like a weak idiot, Kain acts like a crazy flirt, and Aidou acts like a crazy monkey. Well, not really. I haven't read the raping of Aidou yet. (the personality! What were you thinking? You dirty people!)
Now, the girls in the fandom are non-existent. Dead. Ruka, Rima, Seiren, Yuuki, and even Shindou were all packed up and sent to a girls' home. And the OCs *cough* paper cut-outs *cough* all swarm over the VK boys now that the girls are gone! *hears screams from the moon dormitory*
Whew. That was long. And I still haven't talked about the OCs. They are trash which should be roasted over a slow fire. Or dropped into the forbidden forest for Aragog and his acromantula babies to enjoy. Or thrown to the lions in the Roman arena. They would be better off dead.
Hm...Maybe I can recruit them to my army for world domination. *manical laughter* At least I could use them.
Russia~
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